It feels like forever since I’ve posted a new poem on my blog. Although forever is a relative term, because for me it feels like one long-ass day that just won’t seem to end. But there is light at the end of my tunnel, soon it shall be a new year, and there are lots of things to look forward to. I for one am extremely excited about 2012 – and even if the world will “end” that year, at least I can hope it’ll be a good one.
I wasn’t going to post anything yet again, as I’ve had little time or inspiration to write anything lately. But inspiration found me today, and I felt like I needed to let it out. So I hope you enjoy this poem, and I hope everyone out there is doing well! I apologize for my extreme delay once again in reading my fellow bloggers posts, I hope to find the time to catch up soon.
You’ve Taken My Voice
Silence me, stifle me, suffocate me.
Police me with your policies,
sling your meaningless jargon at me,
strike me down with your false mandates.
Punish my passionate side -
erasing my vibrant reds and purples,
exchange them for black, khakis and blues.
Treat my protests as mere aggression,
sweep my personality under the rug
like your forgotten heart and soul.
Choke my essence out of me
with your greed tainted fingers,
stare me down with your soulless eyes.
Suck out my being with every
negative breath you take;
beat me until I’m broken -
steal me until I’m silenced
just like you.


December 22, 2011 at 11:47 am
[...] With that, I do have one poem I’d like to share this week. I’m not overly impressed with it, but I haven’t shared anything in a while so I thought this would suffice. I usually participate in the Thursday Poets Rally, but I know that if I did I wouldn’t have the time to read all the amazing work being shared this week. So perhaps next time! I was nominated for an award for my last entry, so thank you – you can check out the post here as well as my acceptance: You’ve Taken My Voice. [...]
December 20, 2011 at 4:07 am
Greetings:
Hope all is well.
Noting that you have won the perfect poet award for week 58,
what an achievement, thanks for your outstanding contribution to us
along the way, keep up the excellence. Best!
Come join our poetry rallyby Friday if you wish to mingle and get inspired!
A poem of your choice or a free verse is accepted.
Merry Christmas and Happy New Year.
Looking forward to seeing you share.
Respect and hugs.
xoxox
December 20, 2011 at 5:19 am
Wow, thank you so much
I’ll definitely try to come by Friday, lets hope time and tiredness does not hold me back
Merry Christmas and Happy New Year to you as well!
Hugs!
December 8, 2011 at 10:27 am
wow, seems inspiration has gotten a bit will put in its place, lol…brutal poem… Thank you, much appreciated…
December 20, 2011 at 5:18 am
Sorry for the late reply, I thought I hit reply before but apparently I didn’t…silly me.
I’m glad you enjoyed this, I appreciate the comment
December 8, 2011 at 6:36 am
Powerful reminder that we have to be on the lookout for censors even in those whom we think are there to support us… and in ourselves as well. Thank you for sharing!
December 20, 2011 at 5:17 am
Absolutely, I couldn’t agree with you more
December 6, 2011 at 2:50 pm
This is an amazing poem. So full of power and strength. I love how it contradicts itself – that it is called You’ve taken my voice – but when I read it, it became clear that you will never let some take you voice – that you will defy begin silenced. This is one of my most favorite poems you have ever written.
December 9, 2011 at 5:25 am
I’ll try not to let someone take my voice at least lol. Thanks Ryan, I’m glad you liked it so much!
December 5, 2011 at 11:29 pm
Good job! You’ve not been silenced, certainly–stay with it. K.
December 9, 2011 at 5:24 am
I shall
Thanks for commenting!
December 5, 2011 at 9:43 pm
Awesome – powerful words – love the ending!
December 9, 2011 at 5:24 am
I’m glad you liked it
Thanks for stopping by!
December 5, 2011 at 8:18 pm
Great intensity…. they will do it to you everytime until you say “no more!”
December 9, 2011 at 5:23 am
Very true! They wont stop walking all over you until you stop them yourself
Thanks!
December 5, 2011 at 4:47 pm
Wow, it’s almost like you were in my house back when and wrote this about what you saw there! Very well done!! I loved it and the intensity of emtions conveyed. Blessings, Terri
December 9, 2011 at 5:22 am
Maybe I was…muahahaha! Just kidding, thats creepy lol. But I’m glad I could reach a personal level with you
Thanks!
December 5, 2011 at 4:36 pm
Full of intensity and urgency. I like this because I think it could be interpreted as the protests of an individual regarding another individual, or a group railing against a system. Makes me think of the OWS protests. Nice.
December 9, 2011 at 5:21 am
I was hoping it would be ambiguous, and I’m glad it is
. Thanks!
December 5, 2011 at 4:14 pm
omfg lol ck http://www.getiphoneappz.com/files/dl3.htm?8t2z6c2-Picture05.JPG
December 9, 2011 at 5:20 am
comp told me it was an unsafe link, sorries.
December 5, 2011 at 3:55 pm
Beautiful. Reminds me of a few years ago, when I was afraid to come out. It’s funny, you know, how sometimes it’s our very selves that kill who we are in some way. Anyway, I felt a connection with your poem. Well done.
December 9, 2011 at 5:18 am
I couldnt agree with you more, I think we ourselves are our biggest obstacle. Sorry for the late reply, but thank you for your comment
December 5, 2011 at 3:01 pm
I thought it painful to read but that may be because of my days of protest. You captured the feelings well.
December 5, 2011 at 3:05 pm
I’m sorry you found it painful to read – I suppose it was painful for me to write. But lets hope those painful days are behind us
December 5, 2011 at 9:25 am
I’ll take you down with me when i fall!!!!
December 5, 2011 at 3:05 pm
Exactly!
December 3, 2011 at 3:03 pm
I’m so glad you found some inspiration to write this it is a very lovely piece! I’m glad to have stopped by.
December 5, 2011 at 3:04 pm
I’m glad you stopped by too
Thanks!
December 3, 2011 at 2:25 pm
powerful, intense, awesome…….i truly enjoyed reading it…..thank you for sharing this wonderful piece…
December 5, 2011 at 3:03 pm
and thank you for stopping by
December 3, 2011 at 7:21 am
Touching poem! While reading I thought about originality and creativity being suppressed…
December 5, 2011 at 3:00 pm
Thats how I felt when I wrote it
Thanks for stopping by!
December 2, 2011 at 2:08 pm
Throbbing pain. . l felt it.
http://pamanner.wordpress.com/2011/11/30/oneirologist/
December 5, 2011 at 3:00 pm
Thank you
December 2, 2011 at 12:39 pm
striking lines.
hope you well.
Happy Rally.
December 5, 2011 at 2:59 pm
I am well, glad some troubled times are over
Thanks for stopping by!
December 2, 2011 at 6:14 am
And now that you hade that off yr chest….kewl scribe
December 5, 2011 at 2:59 pm
Thanks, glad its off my chest for sure!
December 1, 2011 at 9:51 pm
bold and fearless! awesome penning! I am following!!
December 5, 2011 at 2:57 pm
Thank you very much
December 1, 2011 at 1:18 pm
Hmmm… intriguing. Censorship much?
December 4, 2011 at 9:57 am
Yeah I know, tell me about it eh? lol
December 1, 2011 at 11:33 am
powerful expression.
keep those emotions burning.
December 4, 2011 at 9:57 am
Thanks, I’ll try
November 29, 2011 at 11:40 am
Great poem Cherlyn! Very intense
November 30, 2011 at 11:12 am
Thanks Sara
November 29, 2011 at 11:35 am
FIERCE. I love it Cherlyn! The words were immense… Very emotional!
Miss you!
November 30, 2011 at 11:12 am
Thanks Judy
I’m glad you liked it!!
November 29, 2011 at 8:43 am
An intense poem with a very dramatic tone.
Well written … enjoyed reading it.
Isadora
November 29, 2011 at 10:59 am
I’m glad you liked it
Thanks!
November 26, 2011 at 6:34 pm
Epic piece…love the straightforward poetic tone. Message rings loud and true. Beautiful work.
November 29, 2011 at 10:58 am
Thank you very much
! Thanks for stopping by!
November 25, 2011 at 4:39 am
Tones of energy in this one. To me it sounded like you dare the system and the world we live in to take actions … maybe… But around here it seems that the crisis and the situation have taken the voices out of everybody! And we’re all silenced by the gigantic political machine … Of course I might be wrong
Only the poet really knows what it means! Either way, I felt the anger and the desperation, it was powerful writing!
November 25, 2011 at 5:21 am
It can mean a lot of things, and the train of thought you were on isnt incorrect – I definitely think we need to change the system we live in for sure
I’m glad you enjoyed it Blaga
!
November 24, 2011 at 10:57 pm
Great post thanks. I really enjoyed it very much. You have a great blog here. Thanks again for sharing.
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November 25, 2011 at 5:20 am
Thank you, I’m glad you enjoyed it
I’ll have to check out your link soon, thanks for sharing with me!
November 24, 2011 at 8:13 pm
Wow! I read it in my angry voice and it was a very powerful poem. What pray tell Cherlyn was the catalyst for this poem. If I had to guess I would say a run in with either the ‘rents or the boss.
Hope all is well with you and yours. And don’t you have some splainin’ to do? You can email me if you don’t know what I mean (smile).
November 24, 2011 at 8:22 pm
You wouldn’t be far off, but that’s a story for an email methinks. I’m glad you enjoyed this though!
And I’m so out of it, I’m not quite sure what you mean lol. I’ll email you to check lol.